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अधूरापन

Jaya

है नहीं कुछ फिर क्यों भारी मन है,
दिन के अंत में कैसा अधूरापन है?

बोझिल आँखें, चूर बदन हैं, थके कदम से
कहाँ रास्ता मंज़िल का भला पाता बन है?

अधूरेपन की कविताएँ भी अधूरी ही रह जाती हैं,
पूरा कर पाए इन्हें, कहाँ कोई वो जन है?

Published by Jaya

Jaya Jha is an entrepreneur, a techie, a writer, and a poet. She was born and brought up in various towns of Bihar and Jharkhand. A graduate of IIT Kanpur and IIM Lucknow, she realized early on that the corporate world was not her cup of tea. In 2008, she started Pothi.com, one of the first print-on-demand publishing platform in India. She currently lives in Bangalore and is a product management consultant for startups and tech-product companies (https://practicalpm.pro).

15 thoughts on “अधूरापन”

  1. Nice one…i usually go through your blogs at least thrice a week..I like the poems posted by you as i love hindi..DO you have “RashmiRathi” by Shri Ramdhari Singh Dinkar with you.Can you Please post it,mostly the conversation between “karna ” and “Krishna” .

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  3. agar ye adhurapan nahi hota, aap yahan tak nahin aatin, n dis will keep u moving. so keep moving 4 poornta.

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  4. अच्छी पंक्तियां हैं, शायद लिखने के बाद अधूरापन ज्यादा मैनेजेबल हो गया हो।
    मुझे आपकी एक पिछली पोस्ट याद आ गयी- “सृजन की थकान भूल जा।”

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  6. Namaste,

    Jaya-ji. Apaki kavitaye bahut achchi lagi. iitk k baad bhi aap active hain, jaan kar bahut khushi hui.

    vidya

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  8. यह दिन भी ढल जाएँगा, और सुबह जागेंगा नया आसमान,
    बस इसी विचारों से चला हूँ मै, क्या पता कब बन जाएँगा कारवाँ!

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  9. AM not the one anymore, to make sense out of your thoughts while writing such bits. How can you share such thoughts.. I wonder sometimes.
    Stop enjoying your lonely times this much. 🙂

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  10. hi.. i like few of your writings, but not all of them … though i dont understand these poems much …but this one looks good …probably as it is small …i have been kind of very much impressed by your drive …like many others …of late i also started bloging ..probably your reflection …

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  11. Sometimes, everything looks fine and yet one can’t help but feel that life is elsewhere… Well expressed.

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  12. Jaya,

    What do you think of Indian guys and gals who live together when they go aboard. Just asking as you tend to travel a lot…..

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